After reaching the Archive shop, i headed toward the key-chains. When i was looking for key-chain, i heard the voice of girls coming in. I look behind and i saw around twenty girls entering in the shop. I was looking onto them suddenly i heard somebody calling my name. I looked here and there and find an old friend(Gurpreet Kaur :- She was my classmate in tenth class or its good to say my tut ion mate (I have more things to tell about here which i will tell you later)) waving her hand towards me from the large crowd of girls. Me excitedly asked her:
Hey Gurpreet !! How are you? What are you doing here?
badiya yar.. I came here to take a birthday gift.
For whom?
Do you not know? Do u remind anything?
What thing?
Today is Jojan’s Birthday.
Dam!!!! How can i forget this day?
Tell me what should i have to do now? She will be going to kill me.
Relax yar. She had told me to take her old friends there at party, so u can come with us.
Thanks yar.
I started searching a good gift for Jojan(The first girl i had proposed. She met me on a tution in tenth class. I liked her from the very first day of my tuition’s. I sat beside her on the first day and told her a doubt of maths(my fav.). From that day she came first and book a site for me). While searching i remind that she like chocolates and ice-cream. In tenth class we always went out for a walk and we always took the ice-cream in the way. So, i took a box of chocolates and made a call to make a surprise at party. Then i help the girls to choose their gifts.
(Gurpreet :- The best friend of Jojan. She is with her when they were in class 1st. They always live together and she is the one who always encourage me to propose Jojan).
We all took our vehicles and reached the party place. In the way Gurpreet told me what happens in Jojan’s life in last two and half years. I sent all the girls and my gift in the party. Gurpreet did as i said to her. She had placed my gift on the corner of the gift table. Jojan soon go to place the gift at right place. While placing she saw my name and get excited. She goes here and there to find me. Then Gurpreet gave me signal to come to party. She played Jojan’s fav. song that instant. Jojan saw me entering the party. She came to me and took my hands into her hands. I wished her :- “Happy Birthday”.
continued part 3……



londe tune to macha di, really wat a story and wat a concept.
itne jyada crush mat kiya kr.
aur kya be tune apne lappy ka description nahi kiya be,its not good do it in 3rd part.
waiting desprately for the third part.may we u gave the new turn to the story .
WE LOVE U RC U ROCKS
We Love you RC….
Abey kitni ladkiya mil gayi tuje ek din mein???
I just now readed your bolg…….how a nice continued of the story……you are the very good bolgger yaar…i am like your concept of mitting ‘on’ the tution….and i am remind a thing……this was surefully a too very biggest shop…..(20 girls entering at a time…..hmmm..)
I AM BECOME YOUR FAN….
*RC YOU ARE ROCKED*
story is good…
but description is not dat good..
improve ur english as you have done some gramatical errors…
leaving that apart…its really good for a new commer..
keep it up…
@Intutius
Yar abhi toh kam hi ladkiya milli hai..
and why were you commenting by changing your name.
@submiss
Ya that shop is or archives so had a lot of space for 20 girls. Actually everyone writes school thats why i had written tutions.
@Sh7
shrenik right….
thanks man… i know that i made some grammatical mistake and i m trying to comem over it as fast as possible.